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Vibrant Color

Poem By: Beautiful Simplicity
Poetry


Tags: life, color

I wrote this one a few days ago - I'm still feeling the effects. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 7, 2007    Reads: 56    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


I've finally let go

Everything begins to change

Refreshing life starts to flow

As I set down my heavy bag

 

No regrets, only hope

I smile at the past

I have learned to cope

So I patiently wait for a beautiful future

 

Things are now clear

I feel like singing a new song

Dancing away all my fears,

Running towards the marvelous light

 

I've finally let go!

I'm sucking out the poison

My life now bathing in white snow

Everything is changing

 

I am whole today

As I throw away my hidden trash

There are no more shades of faded gray

Only blissful, vibrant color.


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Comments:

ah, a moment of blissful clarity
what every writer wantss
and captured here with acute simplicity!

Posted: Jun 7, 2007

Wow, it's funny how words can make your day, or break it... and reading this, is like reading a mantra, i'm inspired! Good poem!

Posted: Jun 8, 2007

Beautiful Simplicity:

Another great rendering of most positive and hopeful emotions. Really enjoyed reading this one.

Will you be graduating High School and going to college this year?

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Jun 8, 2007



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