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Black and white world

Poem By: Before the dawn
Poetry


I felt like this was all true. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 15, 2008    Reads: 31    Comments: 6    Likes: 2   


This world has been sabotaged. 

And I'm not the only one to see.

The murders that have been committed by the insane.

Do they kill to have them selfs recognized or to feel alive.

But all have been driven by the one thing that most desired, revenge.

They are all wroms to me, they can wither in the dirt.

But all in time will disaprear.

All are loved ones that have died or have been hurt, can open there eyes and there not the only ones.

And because of the pain and murders and suicides that are done every day.

This world will remained black and white.


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Comments:

i kinda get what you mean but i sure hope this world turns into more shades of gray everyday and eventually be a wonderful scope of vibrant colours. magnificent poem!!!

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

Yup I see what your saying..

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I felt like it was true.

this is good, i see what you're saying!

Posted: Apr 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

what u say it true, tho there is even greater evil in this world, especially state sponsored genocide, but we also need to realise there's also beautiful things in life too

Posted: Apr 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

this is so true. awesome job:)

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

Several spelling errors, but the message is very true overall. I definetly loved it.

Good job on this one :]

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks. I know I can't spell.



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