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Submitted: Apr 1, 2008    Reads: 40    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


My lakes have ran red.

My heart is nothing, but cinders of ashes.

I have fallen.

Theres nothing left of this life, everything is burnt and bleeding.

This cindered life is all I got.

My love for him is all I need.

Don't fall into the black waters.

Don't forget your love for me.

Hold me in your arms so I maybe safe.

Help me fix my broken heart.

This blood needs to be cleaned.

Save me from my sins.

Take me with you so I can be set free.

This life was never ment to be.

Your heaven was never a lie.

Never was.

I smile because my love is too deep.

I've been set free.


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WOW is all I got to say

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

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thanks



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