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The lips that wont kiss back

Poem By: Before the dawn
Poetry


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Submitted: Jun 14, 2008    Reads: 55    Comments: 7    Likes: 2   


Rain over my face, am I good enough

I kiss, but the lips wont kiss back.

And I've lost my mind trying to please others.

Just feeling like everyones fool.

I've lost my will to say anyting.

Because of you my world came crashing down.

For so long I've waited for your lips to kiss back.

All your lies made me feel like the sacrifice.

Am I good enough

And now the light dims but am I good enough.

I sing and never gain.

I'm I good enough for you.

The wind whips my back. Slashing it. I feel the searing pain and the blood is running for nothing.

I cry out in pain.

The slashing and the tearing at my heart that cuts so deep into me. Is unbearable.

I feel like a fool to let you in.

I cry out. Is there going to be light for my song.

Am I good enough for you.

The lips that wont kiss back.

I blind and blur and cry out in vain.

I wont ever now find my finding lips to kiss back.

I want my light and song to keep them here where I know I'll feel good enough at lest for myself forever and ever.


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Comments:

I liked this. It really captures the emotion(the pain, the feeling of being not good enough) Well done!

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. Your the first one to comment on this one.

OoO mysterious!
i love it! You can apply this to a lot of things!
Love the pic too! where did you get it from?

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I look on google.

I love it. There is a lot of emotion in it.

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

There's a lot of emotion and heart felt things in here.

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

this is great poetry... i could capture the feeling of the persona... i love that

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.

hey....its still fees incomplete.....felt like you dint wanna write more.... wat stopped you,,was it that hard

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Maybe someday I will write more to it. I felt like it was finished at the time I wrote it. But I will add more when I get the right feeling for it. It's really hard for me to get into a mood it write poem.
Thanks for the comment.
Tonya.

Great Poem, sad, I could really feel what you were talking about :D
~Lady Leah~

Posted: Dec 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you



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