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A Cold Day in Hell

Poem By: bellavistabear
Poetry


The devastation of broken vows. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 28, 2007    Reads: 36    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


It'll be a cold day in hell

Before I'll listen to your lies.

Believe all your stories

Or fall for the tears in your eyes.

 

Nothing you could tell me

Could erase that image from my mind.

The day I found him in our bed

Your bodies intertwined.

 

You said it was a one-time thing

Through tears you apologized.

I just can't forgive or forget

That scene I've memorized.

 

The vows that you have broken

Cut like shards of glass.

The bonds that once were sacred.

Are memories of the past.

 

On the pain that you have caused

I choose not to dwell

Take you back, I don't think so

It'll be a cold day in hell.


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Comments:

hey Brian, I don't think it would be as bad if one heard about thier love having an afair but to actually see it would take sooooooo long to forget.
it's shocking to the self. this happened to me many many years ago. it's like being stabbed fron the inside out. later.....katie :)

Posted: Aug 28, 2007

Author Comment:

So true...so true. It's never happened to me, fortunately but I imagine it would be somewhat devastating.

Thanks for stopping by.



Brian (bellavistabear)



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