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Heavy Burden

Poem By: benjifirestone
Poetry


When u are helpless to help the one person you love the most you must carry a heavy burden and thus this is what this poem is about View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 30, 2007    Reads: 26    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


 

This heavy burden burns deep

As I attempt to bear this load

Lost unable to help

Stuck in this quick sand

Watching the beatings that you harshly receive

Trapped in my own living hell

I can not play the hero

Rescuing you from the evil dream

You never asked to become apart off.

 

I gave you this diseased heart

But it can't do the things that u need

So trapped in your dream

You shall remain all because

This man you placed your trust in

Is just a lame hypercritic

Who is never able to win

Due to that diseased heart you hold for him

 

Hope is all that shall remain

Whilst you continue to receive each heavy beating

But trapped we both will remain

Until the love we both hold breaks all the chains

Setting us both free


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Comments:

Aw! Thats lovely! In a way, it reminds me of a line from Eternal Sunshine, Kate Winslet says to Jim Carey, "I'm not here to complete you, I'm just a f**ked up girl, looking for my own peace of mind."
This is great, heartfelt and real. Great work!

Posted: May 30, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks i wrote it in a very dark mood whilst at work.



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