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With a deep look inside myself at a low point in my young life I express what I am feeling. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 20, 2007    Reads: 41    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


 

Hello Mr responsibility Mr trustworthy Mr self sacrifice

You just cause me pain

Yet I can be no other way

 

Hello Mr lacks confidence Mr scared Mr frustration 

You make me hide

You make me die inside

You freeze me to the spot while I rot

You make me silent

Never saying what I should

 

Hello Mr never will be Mr Longs to Be

You pull me apart

You rip at my heart

You make me cry

You make me lie

You make me burn myself filling me with this false Hope

I so wish I could be Mr Never more......


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Comments:

Very nice I love the wording.I feel just like MR only Im am a Ms. (^_^). Keep it up great work.

Posted: Feb 1, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks it's really funny that when everything comes down I alway still feel this way



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