Room Of Darkness

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Poem By: benjifirestone
Poetry

Tags: room dark trapped

Inside my head thers is the room of darkness View table of contents...

Submitted: Feb 4, 2007 Reads: 45 Comments: 3 Likes: 0

In this dark room I remain chained

With no window for me to see

Damp and decaying walls all around

No way of escaping from me

No sound apart form my heart still beating

Just waiting to be set free

A big wood door to my right

A heavy lock I wonder what maybe behind

Trapped inside this room I am going crazy

With no one to keep me alive

Why did I trap myself inside

My prison this room has come to be

A sentence I got from the

But carried out by me

Hidden form the world

Trapped with no light for me to breath

Away from all the things I love

In this room trapped for ever more

Only memories to keep me warm at night

Slowly I fade into the darkness

Damp and decaying like the walls around me

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Comments:

Dawn Prest

Nice imagery. Spooky yet sad. Hats off, sir!

Posted: Feb 4, 2007

Author Comment:

One of the many rooms in my head but thanks for taking the time to read it as always

zephyrmail

very deep thoughts there---we all make our own hidden rooms, somedays.........good you can write about it and so well.......

Posted: Feb 4, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks very much. it's like i am in a room inside my head with so many doors to take.

I like this. Sometimes it's so much harder to tare down a wall when you built it yourself. Something about your bio, “for real writers like yourself to tell me that I am right”? What an odd thing to say

Posted: Jun 6, 2007

Author Comment:

well not really all the people who post on here are real writers to me so i let you judge and agree with me that my work is just flowing shit. But thanks for the comments.