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Poem By: benjifirestone
Poetry


Anger is a monster that I become offten. Caused by friends and the secrets that they give me. Thing I don't need in my head. So the following poem is caused by such things View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 23, 2007    Reads: 40    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   


 

Sow my mouth shut

Just to keep it all in

With these secrets I keep

Stitch by blooded stitch

As u fill me with more

Trusting in your faith in my silence

 

Leaving me unable to say a word

Trapped in your dark deeds

Bound by our friendship

 

A contract signed in blood

When we first did meet

I say nothing of what you tell me

In return you be my comrade

 

Coming to me when you cant bottle you own pain

So I drink it instead

Keeping it locked away

So you can live free of guilt

 

A warning I now give

These secrets in which I keep can end it all for you my dear friend

So do not cross or forget me friend

If you do my mouth will unravel

Flowing free showing the world all your dark deeds

Ending it all

Filling you with not only your pain but with mine

Killing you, setting me free


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Comments:

Very well written, such strong words and i completely understand where your coimng from. great stuff!

Posted: Jan 23, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks glad you understood it

Dude, you know how much I love your stuff. This is fekking awesome!

Posted: Jan 23, 2007

Author Comment:

like wise hun your works is also awesome

Very powerful poem, the kind that is very personal and beautifully terrifying, love the imagery of the sewn shut mouth unraveling. Very good work. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your work.

Dino

Posted: Jan 23, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks I am glad that you like it

good one---I have a best friend--we will HAVE to stay friends forever-- we know each others secrets--too well--but, I think we told in trust because we knew our friendship was a lasting one---I hope your 'comrade' never lets you down..

Posted: Jan 23, 2007

Author Comment:

Thats the fear we must all live with. Thanks for thw comment tho



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