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I See Your Eyes

Poem By: Bitter Irony
Poetry


It's hard not to resent the thing you've lost. A sonnet. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 6, 2007    Reads: 139    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


I see your eyes, now turned away from me
remebering a snow once white and pure
that now is melted. You cannot endure
the sight of tidepool youth not pulled to sea
as yours has been, but mine is yet to be.
To you, my lighted eyes are but a lure,
my face, a white disease without a cure,
my lips, forbidden fruit from Eden's tree

while your lips tremble, silent, cold and blue,
lined in age's cruel and bitter frost
and youth is gold with much too high a cost
than silver age can manage to undo.
You glance at me, and I recall to you
the memory of all you now have lost.


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Comments:

Can not say anything but, WOW and Intense. The imageyr from start to finish loved it!
Nicely done!

Posted: Jul 6, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you!

Bitter Irony:

Still my favorite! We may all experience the same things. All we have to do is "live long enough". That or we may never know. Serving to explain why "ignorance can be bliss". Enjoyed reading this.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Jul 8, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks as always!



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