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Still Crying

Poem By: Blood Rose Dragon
Poetry

Tags: love, alone

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Submitted: Oct 15, 2008 Reads: 56 Comments: 2 Likes: 1

Here I sit

Tears in my eyes

The lights unlit

I am alone

I try to hide the pain

Yet the true emotions are still shown

I want to be in your arms

I feel incomplete without you

I want to feel your charm

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Comments:

arogersms

this is really good and really touching you should check out some of my writing

Posted: Oct 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks. Its about one of my ex's. i will be sure to check out ur writing

B Leaf

This is shorter and does not seem to have as much emotion as your other writing that I have read. Don't take that wrong I think this is good but I can relate to the others more.

Posted: Nov 12, 2008

Author Comment:

i know it not my best work in was written in a fluster. i wish i had better luck with it