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Daisy: My Dog

Poem By: BloodyBlade
Poetry


Tags: daisy, dog, sad, emotional

A small poem for my dog cuz we're giving her a away. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 7, 2008    Reads: 55    Comments: 9    Likes: 3   


My sweet Daisy,

I don't know what's worse,

my horrible mom,

or giving you away,

Anyhow, I wish I could still pet you,

and hug you,

I always wanted a puppy.

And i finally got one too,

but something always has to happen,

to my dreadful life,

Everything that I always wanted gets crushed to ashes.

Am i in hell?

My mom never really treated you well,

she yelled at you and slapped you on

the ass, but you know im always

there for you,

my dad loves you with all his heart

i guess he wanted a dog to forget about the death of his

old dog and his father,

You were the cutest dog I've ever seen but

sometimes you didn't listen,

sometimes chaos broke lose,

But don't you worry!

I'll always remember you,

I took pictures of you you on my cell phone.

Please remember me.

I'll love you always!

○Best Wishes○

♥And Love♥

Eric your best friend forever.

* I don't have a picture of her, but i will soon. ill post it up so you can all see how lovely she really was*


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Comments:

oh this is so good love it

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe! thanks. im glad u loved it!

this is really sad but it is very good

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks! im goin to miss my dog.

oh thats so sweet of u!

L ♥

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks! L♥ why do u do that? xD

so people remember me! DUH!

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Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

WTF OKAY! ill copy u. MUAHAHAHA! L♥

A very sad situation expressed so well in your Poem. Would you Mother and Father perhaps allow you to volunteer at an animal shelter ? Then you could give affection to those who really need it and your Mother wouldn't have to deal with the day to day reality of having a small puppy around.

Good Luck and kindest regards,
Nonna

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

hm.... perhaps. it sounds kool and stuff maybe. xD and thanks!

aw nice and sweet and sad :( haha i worked at an animal shelter once i got the crap job....literally i had to clean the cats litter trays and yeah it was crap.. but i felt good coz i helped em out then i quit voulinteering a week later coz i wanted a job that payed me. heheh kool poem though im sure daisy misses you heaps!

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

yah! :( i hope she remembers me.

Hey Blade :) You really seem to be a sweet person and that makes this poem that much better. This is sad but you are honest and you write it so well. I REALLY enjoyed this and I also shed a tear :( Take care, Regan

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

omg thank you for the awesome comment! uh. yup im an okay person i guess. ha! i guess i am honest. *not really* Have a Good Day!

Awww,this is so sad.Im so sorry.I know how u feel.Yea...I always get a pet/s,and then loose them.But I will never loose my dog,wich I love very much.
Im sorry again.
And really nice and sad and sweeet poem.
:)

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you so much. u amde me feel better. xD

This is so sad. i accualy begain to tear =/
The poem was very sweet though

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you. i was crying when i wrote this!



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