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Mental Dialong Of A Man In Love

Poetry By: Bobby Evans

This is a poem of mental dialog that pretty much was going through me head when I came home from leave from Afghanistan and went to meet (now wife) a lady whom I met through a friend. We were meeting for the first time we had only talked via Facebook and phone for about 2 weeks prior to my leave.. It wasn't quite this bad but I felt this way. Hope you enjoy my nerdiness..

Submitted:Sep 10, 2011    Reads: 11    Comments: 0    Likes: 1   

How the first time I met my wife felt like

You have touched my heart in so many ways

I wish i could go back a watch us on the first few days

First love developing like fairytale

Nervous around you deep inhale, deep exhale

Palms sweaty don't be a nerd

Did she see me do that, oh god no awkward

Watching what I say I don't wanna say the wrong thing

Im being myself for the most part but I'm kinda acting

Does my breath stink did she notice

I should have put mouthwash in my bag so brainless

She makes me feel like this is my first time around a girl

Im so nervous I could hurl

I hope I don't say the wrong thing, damn I said that already

My mind is all mixed up, stop shaking be steady

Why does this girl do this to me

I just asked her if she wanted to go eat I hope that didn't come of bossy

Oh she said yes, What is she doesn't like the way I eat

Just play it cool stay upbeat

She's smiling and laughing, she's into you

I just need to find out if she likes me I just need a clue

Ill just sit back and watch, catch the hints

I wish she would have came with blueprints

I don't know why she has me acting like this

ummmmm, maybe because she looks like a god damn princess

shut up self conscious your not helping one bit

Like your doing any better nitwit

Oh god Im arguing with myself

I hope she didn't notice Im talking to myself

Okay play it cool Jack

I like her A LOT but does she like me back?

Well I'll just have to see how the night goes

see how the energy flows

just don't come out and ask her

Wanna be my girlfriend???

By Bobby J Evans


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