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Looking in the mirror into the eyes of someone else..... Someone who lives behind your eyes.
Dislocation continues and the dark is coming.....
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Submitted: Jul 9, 2008 Reads: 59 Comments: 8 Likes: 6
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boneman, a scary poem. it gives the reader an insight into your mind and what its like to live with another voice in your head.
he may sit behind your eyes watching but you have beaten him because you are in charge of yourself not him. You win because you know he is there and you do not let him out. every day you don't let him out you are taking more dontrol of him instead of the other way around. I have nothing but the utmost respect for you.
forever your friend
snow xxx
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
Like Snowbelle I would like you to think about changing a word - "weak" (I know what it is like to say that word to describe oneself) To be able to see the "bully" and in spite of him to write evocative and thoughtful poetry, to battle on irregardless and to live always with hope - that is not weak. That is strength way more powerful than I can imagine. You inspire me Boneman with your courage.
As usual an evocative, painful poem.
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
It is a good poem. It is hard to write like that sometimes. You did it very well.
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
Boneman - This is another great poem! I love how you portray the feeling of somebody else living behind your eyes waiting for their chance to get out and wreak havoc.
Posted: Jul 14, 2008
This poem is wonderful and scary and powerful. You're a strong person Boneman and once again you amaze be by your ability to share yourself with strangers. Great job!
Posted: Jul 17, 2008
heres to waking up from that darkness then, its always hard to put into words something only understandable through experiance of the unexplanable.
answers worth having come from the hardest questions.good luck
Posted: Jul 27, 2008
Oh dear Boneman, what a painful way to live never knowing when or how 'he' will appear and what damage he could do. You must be a very strong person to keep him under control. Wishing you the very best. Lydia, your number one fan.
Posted: Jul 29, 2008
no doubt about this that - this poem brought out the worst fears inside me...can i face my own self in the mirror with confidence HONESTLY....Nope...not me...
This one indeed made me realise that being truthful to one's own self is the most difficult thing in this world....
Posted: Aug 1, 2008
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