Completing a lover
A heart is aching
A soul is bleeding
A lover returns
A lover smiles
A heart is soaring
A soul is smiling
A lover is healing
A lover is complete
Boneman 20/04/2008
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Submitted: Apr 20, 2008 Reads: 66 Comments: 7 Likes: 7
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Hmm? Very nice job. Simple and heartfelt. It's a wonderful job as always Boneman. Your poetry never disappoints. :)
Posted: Apr 20, 2008
Simply but clearly put. Delicate yet strong. I like it.
Posted: Apr 20, 2008
this is really beautiful. it is very gentle. i hope your lover liked it.
take care
your friend
snow xxx
Posted: Apr 21, 2008
Boneman such sweet words of wisdom and love in such a few lines great write.....take care Juliet
Posted: Apr 22, 2008
Aw, this is nice. Anything for a lover like that Boneman! ~ Gypsy
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
Lydia
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Boneman this is a beautiful poem for your lover. It is such an awful feeling being separated from a lover. And such an amazing feeling being together.
Lydia
Posted: May 1, 2008
dani h
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Beautifully simple and simply beautiful.
Dani
Posted: Oct 21, 2008
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