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Femme Fatale

Poem By: boneman
Poetry


A short poem inspired by the opening narration of a Film Noir detective..... A simple scene set in a all night bar. Imagine the narrator in a long coat, hat and a ciggarette permantly attached to his hand, in the other one a shot of whiskey. Eyes red from lack of sleep and the effects of the whiskey.

All in glorious monochrome except for the Femme Fatale calling to him........... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 19, 2007    Reads: 117    Comments: 6    Likes: 6   


 

Femme Fatale

With eyes shot through with whiskey

She looked at me

In a late night bar room

on a wet night

 

The rain poured down outside

The steam rose from the subway

As the late night buses groaned

Crawling through the fog

 

The desperate eyes of the city

Were encased in her head

OH that's just the whiskey talkin

Just a soul lost and alone

 

Like a scene from a Bogart movie

In grainy monochrome

The Femme Fatale looked at me

As her finger circled her glass

 

I knew she'd be no good

I Knew she'd let me down

I knew I'd walk out on her

And that I'd regret forever

 

Femme fatale

In grainy black and white

Femme Fatale

With eyes so dark

 

The barman wipes glasses

As he swats the barflies

The hustlers play pool

The losers get stoned

 

Oh yeah, the losers

Get a dozen for a cent

Three shots for a dollar

Bourbon and late nights

 

They hang around

Fuelled by whiskey

Waiting for their Femme Fatale

As they mourn their last

 

She lights a lucky

Dropping the match on the bar

She blows out a plume of smoke

And calls me with whiskey eyes

 

The dawn is slowly breaking

As the night crawls painfuly away

The barflies melt into the shadows

The losers return to the streets

 

Femme Fatale floats by

And runs her fingers through my hair

And is gone into the dawn

 

All of this I have seen

Through the filter

of a shot glass

Boneman 1996/2007


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Comments:

Heady stuff, like this one a lot.

Posted: Mar 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much for your kind comment.

Peace

Boneman

This one is kind of slinky and sexy - very nice. I also love the "whiskey eyes", very sultry. This was a great one Boneman!

Posted: Mar 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Dragonfly yet again.......

I love film noir and anything to do with the 1930's art deco the clothes. Not keen on the grinding poverty and WWII breaking out but the rest is good.

You don't see many Femme Fatales these days mores the pity.

Peace

Boneman

This was a great piece of work and made good images in the readers mind and i agree with Dragon fly it was sexy but also mysterious and i love that.

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your kind comments.

I have changed my mind, Femme Fatales do exist now a days

Peace

Boneman

Oh, now I see why you wanted me to read this one in particular. They are similar. I LOVE the wiskey eyes. I wish I've thought of that one. People with more talent always think of the good lines! Ha! Great poem Boneman.

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Buttercup for your kind comments......

Funny how things work out.

Peace

Boneman

it is so difficult to decipher and un-entangle a woman

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

Peace

Boneman

wow boneman. took a few goes before i could comment on this, i love the image of a sultry female entangling a man with just a look of her whisky shot eyes. then i am left with the thought at the end did the writer actually see her or were the whisky eyes his from the bottom of his glass..........
yours thoughtfully
snow x x x

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Snow.

Now you got me thinking ! Maybe the Femme Fatale is the whisky?

Mmmmmm

Forever

Boneman x x x



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