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A poem for the memory of the fallen soliders not only in the first world war where the poem is set but throughout all the conflicts.

The old lie still resounds, to die for your country is great and glorious.

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Submitted: Nov 15, 2007    Reads: 48    Comments: 7    Likes: 3   


 
 
Remembrance
 
It seemed to be oh such fun
As we ran to sign up
In the warming August sun
Oh to march away, back by Christmas
Pausing only to batter the Hun
 
It seemed to be oh such fun
As we boldly marched away
Crowds were waving, cheering
A multitude of faces to watch us go
Towards a future we could never know
 
It seemed to be oh such fun
Eighteen years old, never held a gun
To travel see a foreign land
That seemed so far away
Certain I’d be home someday
 
Now the rain is pouring down
All around me the German guns pound
The earth’s foundations shake
As I fear the very sky will break
As funeral drums now I must surely die
 
It seemed to be oh such fun
Safety in numbers it won’t be me
The boys from the old brigade
In our hearts the old lie resounds
Dulce decorum est pro patria mori
 
It seemed to be oh such fun
When we cried havoc and let loose the dogs of war
And now how we rue that fateful August day
 
It was to be oh such fun
As I cling for grim death to my gun
Upon this foreign field
The wounded and the dead hang on the wire
 
Worse of all are the piteous cries
The wounded and the maimed
Screaming for their Mother or cursing God
There is nothing I can do
Stop screaming damn you
 
In Flanders field the poppies grow
In Flanders field the larks still sing
In Flanders field the corpses lie
In Flanders field we believed the lie
 
In Flanders field the shell holes lie
In Flanders field the wire divides
In Flanders field the Reaper flies
In Flanders field we will all die.
 
Dulce decorum est pro patria mori
 
Boneman 2007
 


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dale
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i really enjoyed this poem. very deep

Posted: Nov 16, 2007

Author Comment:

Again anonymous (whoever you are !) thank you for you kind words. I do feel this is a very moving poem not only for WW1 but for all wars past and present.

Boneman

mike
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a poem that makes you consider the stupidity of war and how many young lads and lasses lost their lives through ignorance and government propaganda. your country needs you.......amazing how many youngsters still have a sense of duty. learn a trade..go to war..get killed. maybe they wouldnt be so keen to sign up then. such waste of life. this poem got me on my soapbox. would that we could have peace. poetry like this would not exist. did enjoy the poem!

Posted: Nov 19, 2007

Author Comment:

Mankind for all its wisdom does have a need to find new and more effective ways of wiping out other sections of Mankind. Curious name that "Mankind" when it comes to slaughtering people.

The young men go and die so the old men can protect their little castles then we build cememtries and cenotapths to praise the glorious dead on rememberance day so other young men can go and get butchered so we can remember them......

We cannot forget the soliders who answered the call but there has to be a better way.

Very true, most war is caused by politics. The politicians start wars and the poor bloody infantry get to go and be slaughtered. You cannot win a war only be the last one to stop the killing.

There should be a better way to resolve our differences.

Boneman

Posted: Nov 19, 2007

Do you have ROTC in the UK? (Where they start recruiting kids in highschool?) They dress these boys and girls up in little uniforms and march them around the school to try to recruit other kids. Sad. It's pretty big here. Seems wrong to recruit children who are impressionable. (Stepping down from my soap box now.) Great poem! Makes you think.

Posted: Apr 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Just this week in the UK there has been a news report about concerns with the army going round schools in the more deprived areas and recruiting children into the armed forces.

While I would never lessen the job our soliders do for good I question the need to recruit children and adults without making them fully aware of what the job entails.

There should also be care for the wounded and battle scarred soliders when they come back from a combat zone. It is so wrong that when they have been brave enough to go and fight for their country they are just thrown on the scrapheap when the military has finished either mangling their bodies or their minds.

I'm no peacenick or pacifist but I feel there has to be a better way to resolve conflicts without butchering each other for religion oil and land.

Peace

Boneman

I'm not a pacivist either. I actually come from a military family. My dad was a marine and my brother-in-law is in the army. Still I hate to see people being irresponsible with other peoples lives and children 13-14 years old aren't old enough to make that decision. Just curious if that happened there like it does her.

Posted: Apr 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Happens pretty much the same here, I just think its less explicit. The english dont tend to make such a lot of the military and might makes right. Which is odd really if you think about our history......

Peace

Boneman

I could not read the entire poem...tears stopped me from reading...so painful...

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

It was to be oh such fun
As I cling for grim death to my gun
Upon this foreign field
The wounded and the dead hang on the wire

i cam back and gathered the strength to strength to complete this and be proud of the young soldiers who never think once for themselves...but poor guys, are never asked what they want...they would say , "NO WAR"...

Posted: Sep 21, 2008

Author Comment:

A solider friend of mine once told me "I dont start fights I end them in the shortest way possible without killing anyone if I can."

All soliders look to end war and we should support the soliders brave enough to go out and fight our wars whether we agree with the politics or not.

Politics dont matter when you are being shot at.

Peace

Boneman



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