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A poem for the memory of the fallen soliders not only in the first world war where the poem is set but throughout all the conflicts.
The old lie still resounds, to die for your country is great and glorious.
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Submitted: Nov 15, 2007 Reads: 48 Comments: 7 Likes: 3
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i really enjoyed this poem. very deep
Posted: Nov 16, 2007
a poem that makes you consider the stupidity of war and how many young lads and lasses lost their lives through ignorance and government propaganda. your country needs you.......amazing how many youngsters still have a sense of duty. learn a trade..go to war..get killed. maybe they wouldnt be so keen to sign up then. such waste of life. this poem got me on my soapbox. would that we could have peace. poetry like this would not exist. did enjoy the poem!
Posted: Nov 19, 2007
Very true, most war is caused by politics. The politicians start wars and the poor bloody infantry get to go and be slaughtered. You cannot win a war only be the last one to stop the killing.
There should be a better way to resolve our differences.
Boneman
Posted: Nov 19, 2007
Do you have ROTC in the UK? (Where they start recruiting kids in highschool?) They dress these boys and girls up in little uniforms and march them around the school to try to recruit other kids. Sad. It's pretty big here. Seems wrong to recruit children who are impressionable. (Stepping down from my soap box now.) Great poem! Makes you think.
Posted: Apr 8, 2008
I'm not a pacivist either. I actually come from a military family. My dad was a marine and my brother-in-law is in the army. Still I hate to see people being irresponsible with other peoples lives and children 13-14 years old aren't old enough to make that decision. Just curious if that happened there like it does her.
Posted: Apr 8, 2008
I could not read the entire poem...tears stopped me from reading...so painful...
Posted: Aug 1, 2008
It was to be oh such fun
As I cling for grim death to my gun
Upon this foreign field
The wounded and the dead hang on the wire
i cam back and gathered the strength to strength to complete this and be proud of the young soldiers who never think once for themselves...but poor guys, are never asked what they want...they would say , "NO WAR"...
Posted: Sep 21, 2008
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