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Run from it

Poem By: boneman
Poetry


A race against the daemons that populate my soul and my body.
Also a song with a off tempo beat something along the lines of a Tom Waits song.

A race I know I can win even though it is going to be a marathon as opposed to a 100 yard dash. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 18, 2008    Reads: 79    Comments: 4    Likes: 4   


Run from it all
 
The morphine runs deep in my veins
The pain runs deep in my soul
Tearing my emotions
Raping my self control
 
Run from it all
Run as fast as you can
Run from the pain
Run from the pills
Running through my soul
 
I admit I have a problem
There is no cure to restore
The broken china
The pieces are scattered
 
Run from it all
Run as fast as you can
Run from the pain
Run from the pills
Running through my soul
 
I am snared by self doubt
Someone has barred the way out
It’s something to hold on to
And call my own
 
Run from it all
Run as fast as you can
Run from the pain
Run from the pills
Running through my soul
 
Morphine is all I am
Pain is all I’ll be
I can never overcome it
Only try to outrun it.
 
Boneman 18/03/2008
 
©Boneman productions 2008


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Comments:

boney, you will win this fight, be it a 100 yard dash or a marathon. you have friends who will help you. do not ever give up. morphine is not all you are, you are talented.
this talent you have is too good to waste. do you have the music written for this?
please take care of yourself
your friend
snow xxx

Posted: Mar 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Snow for your very kind comment.

I have no intention of giving up ever until I cant continue any longer then I know my forever friend will give me the courage and the strength to get up again.

I am honoured you think so highly of my talent. The music is on the way....... Maybe see what this new MP3 thing is like.

Your friend

Boneman x x x

"Morphine is all I am, Pain is all I’ll be" - It might seem true at times, but it's not so. You're amazing and talented and sweet. Emphasis on talented - Another great piece!

Posted: Mar 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your kind words Dragonfly.

Again I am honoured you rate my writing so highly.

Never been called "sweet" before lol

Peace

Boneman

Very amazing! this is a great poem, you are very talented. It's a sad piece, but your insight on pain is what makes it so phenomenal.
Hold on to what you got, because sometimes you will feel like it's all you have.

Xx Ash xX

Posted: Mar 19, 2008

Author Comment:

I thank you kindly for your very kind comment Ash.

I will hold on to as much of me as I can for as long as I can.

Peace

Boneman x

This is an excellent expressive piece, almost Dylan like (can you sing?) Outrunning it could be good enough Bomeman, just don't let it catch you and bury you or the world will lose your special talent and from my observation a kind and generous and special person.

Posted: Mar 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your kind comment Anna.

Outrunning it seems like the best option at the moment you would be surprised how fast I can move given my size :)

I am honoured with the Dylan comparison, as i feel I will never achieve his standard of writing. Luckily I think I sound better than him but that is not for me to say.

Also many thanks for the kind words.

Peace

Boneman x



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