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Final Thoughts

Poem By: Brian Peza Perrins
Poetry


Tags: death, dying, overdose

The dying thoughts of an addict View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 19, 2008    Reads: 8    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


Stuck in the present, no future or past
Is this the beginning of the end at last?
 
Daren’t look back to the trouble and plight
Can’t see no way forward just blinding light
 
Paranoia sets in, sweat runs down my face
Could this be the end of the human race?
 
Nausea eats away at my very existence
Weariness wears down the will for resistance
 
Claustrophobic feeling of silence resonates
Anxiety rises as the shadowy fear accentuates 
 
Lying in darkness afflicted with pain
Is this a dream or am I going insane?
 
Consciousness waning, head spins to the beat
Mind ebbing away, bodily fluids excrete
 
As body and mind fail to respond to resistance
Subconscious thoughts die into the distance.


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Comments:

A very graphic piece Brian, great read.

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Many thanks Deb your comments are greatly appreaciated as always

I like this one Brian. Well chosen words, confidently expressed.

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Many Thanks for your comments secondchance

A beautifully intense write, wonderful .x

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Many thanks for dropping by and leaving comment Katrina



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