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Lost in my mind

Poem By: Brittni
Poetry


Poem I wrote basically about disappointment. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 14, 2008    Reads: 29    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Lost in my mind
 
I get lost in my mind,
Not knowing where to go,
Then I see you standing there,
My light at the end of the tunnel,
Motioning for me to come closer,
You take me deeper,
Deeper into my mind,
Until you let go,
Leaving me there,
To find my own way out


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rose89

again very simple but descriptive at the same time ... i like this!

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Maple Bowen
Maple_Bowen

Simple and precise! I really love it, descriptive and wonderful! Keep it up, I love your writing! =)
~Maple

Posted: Aug 28, 2008



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