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Love poem about cuddling...I guess. Teddybear, pillow, whatever it is. This is about that. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 9, 2008    Reads: 25    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


I lay here on my pillow

With closed eyes and dream

I know how lucky I've become

And everything I need

My pillow has a strong heartbeat

Almost like a constant song

I feel his breathing through the cotton

And I know there's nothing wrong

My pillow is my everything

My only "One and Only"

And thanks to my pillow, I can finally dream

And never, ever feel lonely

He is my perfect angel

My pillow sent from far above

I'll always have him so I know

What we have is really LOVE


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Hi. I like the line 'my pillow has a strong heartbeat'
It made me think about how you sometimes hear your own heart beating as you lie in bed. It can be calming...something to do with 'memories' of being in the womb maybe, as someone once suggested. Thanks for sharing this. Ricky.

Posted: Feb 9, 2008

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thanks for reading (and writing what u thought) i'm glad u like it!



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