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Poem By: bssboys
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Its a small poem that describes sbout a friendship between a guy and a girl who were so sensitive for each other that they did not shy away to tell their feelings... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 31, 2008    Reads: 72    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


A Friend

Once i had a friend,

so deep was our friendship,

that we never argued for the sake of it.

We cuddled, we cared  but we never fought,

'coz we didn't wanted the other to be hurt,

so was our friendship.

One day, the spring breeze carried my friend to the port of love,

and then she was happy all the day,

when i asked, she simply ignored

'coz she didn't wanted me to be hurt..injured.

Wheather froze our friendship as stone,

the almighty can't break it, it was so strong,

atleast that was the thought  i had own.

Then one rosy day, she got married but didn't wanted to inform me,

'coz i may be hurt, so was our friendship.

Now she is  gone, leaving me tattered,

but i couldn't confess as she might be hurt...


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Comments:

Aww, such a sweet poem. I've been there before, too. You did a wonderful job. :)

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the motivation :)

Time for a stiff upper-lip.

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for advise, i guess it seals the pain.



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