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Yes, the koala is invited. And even you too.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
You are most welcome, anytime.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
You don't need to ask. You are. My doors are always open. We don't have ADT alarm system in our home.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
Of course you are welcome. I have enjoyed all your works.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
When do you want to come. This koala tugs at my heart strings.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
This poem really touches my heart too. YOu are walways welcome with me my friend. Beautifully written.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
Oh that's so cute!
Posted: Apr 26, 2008
Come om in and take your boots off. Let's talk.
Posted: Apr 26, 2008
I already opened it for you. ^^
Posted: Apr 27, 2008
Oh, I really like it! The acknowledgment of how needy it sounds but a not caring; just wanting to be let in. Lovely.
Posted: Apr 27, 2008
Awwww
Very sweet. I love the pic! I received a stuffed Koala from a favorite teacher in third grade. Now, my daughter is in third, and the Koala has been handed down to her.
In reference to your poem, I like the feel of it, the want in it. Not necessarily needy, but just the want. Here, mi casa es su casa. (Okay, not sure about the spelling!!)
MA
Posted: Apr 27, 2008
I really like this. It was really good.
Posted: Apr 27, 2008
Dear Bubbly: There is a famous saying: "One door closes, another opens!" But even here you must discriminate, to choose what's revealing for you - esp. in this 21st Century - as you say in 1 of your other poems. Kentero
Posted: Apr 28, 2008
wow this is amazing...i love the picture, its real cute...Great great great job! =)
Posted: Apr 28, 2008
The Koala is invited as long as it brings brownies. Lol, you're invited too (bring the Old Dutch salt and Vinegar chips) .
Great poem. I love it.
~Kaori
Posted: Apr 28, 2008
Okay Okay, if you bring the Old Dutch Salt and Vinegar chips you can come. Forget about the koala. ^_^
~Kaori
Posted: Apr 28, 2008
Mi casa es su casa is Spanish. (I'm half Spanish, but my Spanish-speaking is terrible. My spelling, even worse!) It means My home is your home. It's like welcoming in a visitor and treating them like family.
MA
Posted: Apr 28, 2008
Deep. Anyone with a mind like you is welcome in my heart anytime ^^
Posted: Apr 29, 2008
yeah this is really good i like it!! thanx for the comment.
Posted: Apr 29, 2008
Really enjoyed this and the door is always open
Posted: Apr 29, 2008
You are cuter than this koala. You are always welcome. But if you'll bring the koala along, it'll be double cheers.
Posted: Apr 29, 2008
Cute, eh.
Posted: Apr 29, 2008
So cute.
Posted: Apr 29, 2008
You are welcome anytime. My door and even my heart is open. Just walkin. And help yourself.
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
I will invite you only if you bring along the koala. No. no, I'm mean. You are welcome.
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
Just too nice.
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
Lovely koala, lovely you.
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
aww this is so cute! I the flow is amazing...I can't even describe it :)
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
G'day Bubbly,
Seems you have Koala-fications for writing gentle verse.
JG
Posted: May 2, 2008
I love the koala and you too. And I don't want to have choice. Both together
Posted: May 3, 2008
Love it too.
Posted: May 4, 2008
WOW
Posted: May 4, 2008
You are always welcome, anytime.
Posted: May 4, 2008
Simple but well said. :-)
Posted: May 5, 2008
Please get in!! :)
Posted: May 6, 2008
Yes , we are not better than no one , we are not a island in the middle of the sea!
Posted: May 6, 2008
amazing poem...
says so much in so little words...
very nice :)
Posted: May 8, 2008
Come in! The door's not locked.
Posted: May 8, 2008
I like this poem quite a lot. There's a friendly warmth to it, but some despair also.
Posted: May 12, 2008
Wow i love this. Can u write more like this? Short and good? It awesome!
Posted: May 15, 2008
Hi girl. very strict and straight forward poem.
NICE WORK!
Posted: May 16, 2008
My goodness, i really like this. It's cute, yes, but not in the cliche sort of way. It tugs most firmly on your heart strings. Touching. Lovely.
Ash
Posted: May 16, 2008
so sweet....
Posted: May 16, 2008
Another awesome job from you. Its so well put. =P
Posted: Jun 5, 2008
lol
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
Time to give up on this jerk and come through the door of my Booksie site, where you will always be welcome.
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
nice.. Poem... kinda sad though most folks do not deserve to be on a pedestal that big!
Posted: Jul 8, 2008
nice.. Poem... kinda sad though most folks do not deserve to be on a pedestal that big!
Posted: Jul 8, 2008
What a warm and wonderful feeling I get from this.
Beautiful.
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
Thats wonderful again, ur a good writer.
Posted: Jul 29, 2008
lovely poem gorgeous .
my heart is an open door and a special place waits behind that door , just for you.
terry
Posted: Jul 30, 2008
...come in. Ahhh, nice, simple, short and a very sweet story with a very real metaphor!
Posted: Sep 26, 2008
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