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someone may need you somewhere. let ur friends know u care and spread a word around so that others too remember them. View table of contents...
Submitted: May 5, 2008 Reads: 97 Comments: 35 Likes: 33
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that was very sweet. That must be why you have such a bubbly personality.
Posted: May 5, 2008
Aww Sweet. I think its cute.
~Kaori
Posted: May 5, 2008
this is really cute....
Posted: May 6, 2008
WOW! You beat me in emotions and words.
Posted: May 6, 2008
Hellow beautiful bubbles. You are the life and soul of this poem. I will always call you. Promise.
Posted: May 6, 2008
Its so warm and touching.
Posted: May 6, 2008
Brilliant.
Posted: May 6, 2008
You write from the heart. And that is what I like about your work and you.
Posted: May 6, 2008
Short and sweet and just as beautiful as you.
Posted: May 6, 2008
This poem reflects your soul, your inner beauty.
Posted: May 6, 2008
Your comparison with the cab on call is funny as well as realistic. Both friends and cab are needed.
Posted: May 6, 2008
Thirty thumbs up.
Posted: May 6, 2008
Extremely meaningful in today's context and times.
Posted: May 6, 2008
You a way to touch others' hearts with your words and poems.
Posted: May 6, 2008
When I read this poem, I remembered my friend (you) and called her up immediately. This comment is my call.
Posted: May 6, 2008
This one is a wake up call to call your all long forgotten friends.
Posted: May 6, 2008
Simply superb.
Posted: May 6, 2008
Cool. Its like silent waves that rock you as well as has calming and soothing effect.
Posted: May 6, 2008
It's a very sensitive and sentimental poem.
Posted: May 6, 2008
I have read very few poems that move me as intensely as this one.
Posted: May 6, 2008
Real good work.
Posted: May 6, 2008
This is about life's most important aspect - caring for others, for one's friends.
Posted: May 6, 2008
Hy!bubbly, this is vicky.punne4e
Do call me-i wanna say just simple shor and sweet too
to knock on someone's heart,keep this type of writing,may be it's nowadays trend and your work really noticeable.If you regularly check your mail then now check my mail and please reply too.
God bless you.
Posted: May 6, 2008
A good one
Posted: May 6, 2008
Very effective poem!
Rosa
Posted: May 6, 2008
i like this poem, its very easy to relate to and i can often find myself muttering something similar to this when i get home from school.Keep up the writing, it suits you!((Cherry))
Posted: May 7, 2008
aww thats nice and sweet
Posted: May 7, 2008
wow! this is sweet!
Posted: May 7, 2008
As already noted by your many readers, this is cute, simple, touching, warm and so many other things. For me, I like the way you elevatw something that's common and everyday - our eternal, though often subdued or unexpressed, need to be remembered - to a poetic status.
Posted: May 9, 2008
So sorry I wrote "elevatw", instead of "elevate". The "w" and the "e" are adjacent - on the keyboard.
Posted: May 9, 2008
Short as it may seem but that's exactly so comforting to know. Simple words mean a lot. :-)
Posted: May 9, 2008
I LOVE it. Sorry hun, I've been off for ages, but I'm really enjoying your work. You're so popular here, and I can see why!
Posted: May 12, 2008
at least being called names or anything shows SOME emotion. indifference is the opposite of love. anything else will work. Brilliant Poem, Bubbly. I love your work.
Posted: May 13, 2008
Wow this is relly good. I like it!
Posted: May 21, 2008
Soo short, but still really good. I don't know what else to say! =D
Posted: May 23, 2008
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