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If I were a free bird...

Poem By: bubbly
Poetry


Its all about dreams, aspirations, freedom. Can we have all we aspire for? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 16, 2008    Reads: 176    Comments: 27    Likes: 15   


Am I dreaming
Can I dream of - of being a free bird.
I will jump with joy, give loud cries of glee
I will dance and dance as I will be free.
I will do what I like which is nothing much
I will laugh and laugh because I am as such.
I will live life queen-size I will do as I please
I will set my own pace I will live a life of ease.

But all this will come If I were a free bird
"Open your eyes, day-dreamer! late for office, you nerd."
Oh, these pressures, routine, when will I do my own thing
Getting late, skip breakfast, comb, dress, be on a wing.
Dreams will never cease, daily routines will never ease.
I will never be a free bird, as I belong to 21st century world.


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Comments:

nerd - that words still around - back then

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

a big THANX. :-)

I love it! I guess no one's really free these days.

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

cathy, thanx a lot. i value ur feedback and look forward to hearing from u again. :-)

of course freedom has become casualty these days. what's the use of being in 21st century.

Posted: Apr 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. :-)

i'm a free bird XD
i really liked the first part of the poem. =)

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx for ur valuable feedback. it'll make me strive to write more and much better. cheers! :-)

I like the wistfulness in the first part and then the way you jammed everything together in the 2nd part. Great poem!

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx for your invaluable feedback. it has made a simple poem meaningful. :-)

ahh after reading the second part, it made me feel caged for a second there.. heheh love the idea of this poem. great work!

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

i wish i were a free bird but i've to go to work first thing monday morning (upto friday). how i look forward to friday evening. and how i won't want to wake up on monday morning. alas! :-)

Cute one!! Indeed!! I like it.. It clearly says you are a busy person longing for a diversion from your routine! I feel so!

Posted: Apr 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. ur feedback lends value to my poem. :-)

Guess, we all are short on time. Lovely.

Posted: Apr 22, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. :-)

Freedom is luxury.

Posted: Apr 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. :-)

love this one. Freedom is everything.

Posted: Apr 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. it is. ;-)

jason
(not registered user)

Doesn't matter what century, you can be free anytime you want, the kingdom is inside..........Take care.

Posted: Apr 27, 2008

Author Comment:

dear invisible, thanx but personal is neither public nor political. ;-)

This is the mother of all poems.

Posted: Apr 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. ;-)

I loved it and it is so true.

Posted: May 5, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! susan. i guess, v all crave for the same elusive xanadu. ;-)

Oh, so very true. You seem to be a happy person! I would also like to refer you to my poem titled 'Rats in a Race', which is on a similar theme but with a different tone. Your opinion would be welcome.

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! urja. i've read ur poem. in fact, i wanted to list one of ur poems in weekly top 10. it's always nice to read new and fresh. u've lot of energy in ur work. ;-)

This piece is interesting because, to me, it reflects two different periods of life. The first part describes young idealism for the future. The second part shows what actually happens as we "mature" and move on up into the real world where our idealistic dreams become just that.

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! steve. u know, it feels good to receive a comment but a knowledgeable comment as urs is always highly welcome. it completes the picture. ;-)

Great poem I love it specially the first part about freedom. Life keeps getting busier by every second. And don't worry you will be a 'free bird' soon.

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! raya. thanx. i'm glad u liked it. ;-)

the word "nerd" caught my attention, lol...well, thats cuz ive never seen a word from someone's floating mind flat out in a POEM
I love ur character like that!!!

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! sunset. thanx. u should truly rename urself SUNRISE for u raise my spirits with ur wonderful comment. thanx again. ;-)

It's been a childhood dream of mine to be a bird. I even got the name birdy and bird queen because i'm in love with them. I draw birds, paint them, rescue them, own them ( three parakeets) and write about them. Surprisingly I haven't liked any of the pieces I've written. My thoughts never come out the way I want them to on paper. Lol. I even have my heart set on one day helping protect the endangered species. I am too kind for my own well being, I often give more than I ought to and recieve much less than I deserve, but that's never been a problem with me. I am too uselfish, the only thing I ever ask people for is silence and on special occasions books. :) I liked your poem very much. I think the principle reason for my longing to be a bird is that they have so much freedom, just as you said in this peice. It only makes it a more enjoyable read if I can relate, and I have to say I most certainly did. :)

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! angela. u r a diversely talented and creative girl. and to be kind to animals, birds or plants'll bring u more kudos. v can've more freedom if v respect others' freedom.

and thanx for liking the poem. for freedom is most cherished. gee. ;-)

Free bird. What a nice thought hey. Really great poem xxx

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! trude. thanx for liking the poem. lol. ;-)

Makes ya think...is being a free bird really what it's cracked up to be? Or, is our freedom within boundries actually the true freedom we can handle. NIce poem...very surface but can dive deep. :)

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! cl. there is no limit to freedom of spirit. it is v, who set boundaries to it. and the poem is open to interpretation. thanx for a thoughtful comment. lol. ;-)

This one is good. In 100% agreement with that second verse.

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ty. thanx for liking the poem. lol. ;-)

thats a wonderful piece of work that u have said. excellent. it reflect the truth of everyone lives.

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! i. i'm glad u liked the poem. thanx. lol. ;-)

Wonderful poem. That is the problem with dreams sometimes, they can never come true. But you can always keep those feelings of soaring free in your heart, where it will get you through the day. I really like this poem. :)

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! mikey. thanx. probably that's why v all take shelter in our own dream worlds. lol. ;-)

Yes, you are right,
How we wish we are free,
free to fly and to soar.

But we are locked in our daily grime,
9 to 5, we are in our office,
or 24/7, in our role at home.

How we wish we are that bird,
to fly and be free

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! snow. thanx. life is made up of choices - to be free and do ur own thing or to be prim and carry on with the routine. i'm between the two. lol. ;-)

That was good!
I too want to be free, to fly.

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! rio. thanx. u r as free as u think. ur freedom extends with ur imagination. don't restrict urself and feel free to fly. sky is the limit. lol. ;-)

Enjoyed that one. Adore you're writing Bubbly. Keep at it


-DD

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

I liked it! Reminded me of an old poem book I read as a young man, are you famliar with it? "Rhymes of A Rolling Stone"

Posted: Aug 26, 2008



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