So powerful, yet so simple Welcome.
They can open closed doorsHi!
They can change the world Thanx.
Theystrike aninstantbond Take care.
And create peace all around. Have a nice day.
100% Canadian
100% mine.
So universal yet so personal.
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Submitted: Apr 25, 2008 Reads: 205 Comments: 49 Likes: 39
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These words are really cute.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
They make us a better human being.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
Your powerful words have already created greenery. So sweet.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
May God bless you.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
I like this.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
Really nice. It's amazing how so many forget about the simplest words that can mean so much to someone. L ove it.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
Lovely sentiments, pity there weren't more of them in this world.
Posted: Apr 26, 2008
These are words I'm trying to appreciate and use more sincerely. Very lovely way of putting them, especially since they're tossed around so carelessly.
Posted: Apr 26, 2008
Wow, that was wonderful, and so ture. You did a great job. Very moving. :D
Posted: Apr 26, 2008
very very heartwarming.. i loved it =)
Posted: Apr 26, 2008
very easy to write and preach....difficult to do....right
Posted: Apr 26, 2008
jason
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Yes you are right. The simple everyday messages mean the difference, more people should remember. The piece is a little obvious but that's just what I think
Posted: Apr 27, 2008
Very well written. Simple every day words make a lot of difference when spoken sensibly. You can also read a few of my stuff. LOL
Posted: Apr 28, 2008
you have some really good words, very unique idea i really like it!! haah and i loved "100% Canadian".. made me smile!
Posted: Apr 28, 2008
I loved the 100% Canadian, Cause I'm one too!!! Lol, anyway, such simple words, yet so hard to do. I Love it
Posted: Apr 28, 2008
wow i love it...im glad you wrote about this...great job! =)
Posted: Apr 28, 2008
Nice.
Posted: Apr 29, 2008
Powerful yet gladden the heart.
Posted: Apr 29, 2008
You are a dear.
Posted: Apr 29, 2008
God bless you always bubbly.^^
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
They indeed are.
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
These words are a way of life with me.
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
Nice words.
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
No doubt, nice words.
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
Wow you are bubbly, I see that if you use those words they are strong.
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
I liked it...very good^_^
Posted: May 1, 2008
This one is a beauty.
Posted: May 3, 2008
You are right - powerful amd shaking.
Posted: May 4, 2008
So sweet.
Posted: May 4, 2008
Wonderful poem.
Posted: May 4, 2008
Nice positivity...you're living up to your name Bubbly! Ricky.
Posted: May 4, 2008
Yes, I still think you must be eternally optimistic. It is a nice reminder for all of us to be kind and thoughtful of others.
Posted: May 4, 2008
Words to live by.. Those very words we as parents teach our children when they're small, but somehow we forget to use them ourselves.
Posted: May 5, 2008
Simple words... I myself forget to use them... Shame on me... Thanks for reminding me, Bubbly. You're a sweet person.
Posted: May 6, 2008
Well , really powerfull ! Good , I liked.
Posted: May 6, 2008
Personally, I cannot identify with the word 'nice' - as your poem expounds, inflates, the simple 'niceness' and gives so much the less said, the more said... and expressed in such simple one-liners... more than can be expressed by simply saying 'thank' as i do to you. It reminds me so much of my 'all american/canadian' experiences, if i dare compare!!!! but the wholesomeness the shines through is so true to your part of the world... 'have a nice day', 'you're welcome', remains .......'so universal' as in S.Africa we say 'Sawubona' - 'hello, how are you'...i reminds us all 'universally' that is and do 'have a nice day'
Posted: May 7, 2008
Very powerful, sweet, warm words, it does mean a different, except that plenty of people often ignore the importance of it...
Posted: May 9, 2008
Hi Bubbly!
Thanx for your precious gift of poetry.
You're 100% Pure Sweetness
Take care.
Have a nice day.
Posted: May 13, 2008
too true for words!
Posted: May 13, 2008
Universal and personal, I loved that part.
This is short, sweet, and really nice =] It is the simple things that spread cheer.
Aha, take care. =]
Posted: May 17, 2008
yup......... all powerful great... words ..
Posted: May 19, 2008
Hi Bubbles,
Simlpe words, that acknowledge the worth of another human being. Acknowledge that they are alive, have value and purpose, and should be given respect.
Well done.As 100% Canadian as maple syrup; flowing sweetly on the tongue.
JG
Posted: May 19, 2008
Very simple and yet very eloquent. Congratulations this is indeed a very nice piece with a wealth of meaning.
P.S what's the 100 percent Canadian part about.
Posted: May 25, 2008
Bubbly ` you'd be so very amazed at just how much these words mean to me when a stranger says them. Like the grocer, a store clerk. It makes life so much more pleasant for the giver and reciever of the words. Great Job!
Posted: May 27, 2008
Oh and come to OZ where our warm welcome is
"G'daye Mate"
and we'll ask you
"How's things?"
(or if you follw AFL?)
and we'll do things like "adopt a pensioner" when the governments of the day don't give a damm.
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
LOVED IT! I love the whole concept of the poem! Nicely done! Like I said before... LOVED IT!
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
So simple yet so powerful. Great stuff xxx
Posted: Jul 15, 2008
Sure these words are powerful, but they are no more personal to u now...thanks 4 sharing such a wonderful piece
Posted: Jul 29, 2008
I enjoyed the magnitude of this presentation. GJ
Posted: Aug 6, 2008
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