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Cake, Squirty, and Spot

Poem By: caralouann
Poetry



blloob blloob Please feed me
blloob blloob Can't you see
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Submitted: Nov 25, 2007    Reads: 31    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Cake, Squirty, and Spot

 

 

blloob blloob Please feed me
blloob blloob Can't you see

blloob blloob I need food
blloob blloob Give me something good

blloob blloob Please I'm begging
blloob blloob Can't you see me swimming

blloob blloob See me follow your hand
blloob blloob Please reach for that can.

blloob blloob Please feed me
blloob blloob I'm begging please

Author notes

The blloob blloob is to represent bubbles.

This is about my son's three fish Goldfish name Spot he had a black spot and fins but he now is all gold.
A Calico Goldfish named Cake.
And A Beta name Squirt.
They are like dog's the see me around the tank and they beg for food, they follow our hand's, they let us hold them in the water. Never seen fish that are so friendly. They seem to have personality.


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I like goldfish. I could watch them all day.

Posted: Nov 29, 2007

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Thanks for the comment



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