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*My Guiding Angel*

Poetry By: Carlee

I didnt do my best on this but I like it. There is some changes I want to make. But, I would appreciate it if all of you would tell me what you think of it first before I do so. Thanks(:

Submitted:Nov 2, 2012    Reads: 62    Comments: 16    Likes: 5   

Walking down this Hall,

I hear someone call.

I dont know who it could be, but

it is screaming for me.


I got to the end, looked around,

nothing was found.

I stand here thinking "Am I going Crazy"?


But, then again I heard something call my name

& everyone claimed that this place was haunted but

I didnt listen.


Moving here was my decision.

What have I got myself into?!

I cant believe what they were telling me

was true.


Im laying here trying to sleep.

A voice I hear wispering my name

& it sounds exactly the same.


I got up & looked around but once again,

nothing was found.

Everything then was quiet,

I couldnt hear a sound.


I got a lack of sleep that night,

scared to death because they were right.


This place is really haunted.

There is something her,

& I can feel it near.


As nights go by its gotten even worse,

hearing voices even more, I can hear it clearly then before.


Im seeing creepy things & hearing things that I dont understand.

Why havent I ran?

Its like I can feel something grabbing my hand,

pulling me back.


I dont know what it could be,

but its definately wanting something from me.


During my sleepless nights,

Ive been having flashbacks from my past

whenever nothing wasnt going right.


Its like something in this house is trying to tell me something,

& Ive tried figuring it out, but I got nothing.


But, then it hit me,

that its trying to tell me to let go of the past

& that it does not matter now.


This thing is not haunting me,

its been with me all my life, not just in this place

everyone claimed that was haunted.


But, its followed me everywhere,

its an angel that god has sent from up above,

watching over me and from my past trying to set me free


Its brought me a light, guiding me through this path where I should be,

its telling to move on from the path ive been taking.


& telling me, that a new life I should start creating

& thats what I now plan to do,

im tired of all the same things that ive been putting myself through.


I am ready for a change, to erase all of this pain

thats been driving me insane.


This angel, I realize now that its been with me for so long,

helping me to become strong & stay from all of the wrong

that ive been getting myself into

& this guiding angel, I am thankful for you.



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