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Fearing's Something

Poem By: Catherine
Poetry


Just a poem I wrote a LONG time ago...so bear with me if it sucks. Once you read it, it's kind of self-explanatory. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 24, 2008    Reads: 52    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


What’s a word?
What’s a name?
What’s a face?
Same old same.
What is love?
What is hate?
What is now?
What’s too late?
Too late for hurt,
Too late for lies,
Too late for me,
Too late for cries.
What’s now is then,
What’s then is gone,
What’s gone is scared,
To ever come.
Come back to you,
Come back to us,
Come back to something it can’t trust.
Trusting’s nothing,
Caring’s nothing,
Loving’s nothing,
Fearing’s something.
Fearing something that’s always there,
Fearing something that shouldn’t scare.
Fearing love, and fearing you,
My scarring heart has torn in two.
No longer whole because of you.


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Comments:

I loved it :) Your rhyming is incredible. Something I liked to do in my earlier poems. Not so much anymore. But this... this was just so marvelous. :)

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

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Thanks! :D

amazing. like angela said your rhyming was great

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks:) I totally look forward to your guys' comments:)

wow...sad but it flows well. brings back memories to me. i really enjoyed it though.

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad:)

nice poem......rhyming was good.......

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks:)

Awsome! Loved the rhymes! kinda sad but great flow!

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

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thanks:)



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