Trusting’s nothing,
Fearing something that’s always there,

Random First Lines: those eyeshis lipsi want to watchas they trace my mouthhis hands pull on my zipper of my jackethands that have... : Poetry » Read
Just a poem I wrote a LONG time ago...so bear with me if it sucks. Once you read it, it's kind of self-explanatory. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 24, 2008 Reads: 52 Comments: 5 Likes: 1
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I loved it :) Your rhyming is incredible. Something I liked to do in my earlier poems. Not so much anymore. But this... this was just so marvelous. :)
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
amazing. like angela said your rhyming was great
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
wow...sad but it flows well. brings back memories to me. i really enjoyed it though.
Posted: Jul 3, 2008
nice poem......rhyming was good.......
Posted: Jul 3, 2008
Awsome! Loved the rhymes! kinda sad but great flow!
Posted: Jul 16, 2008
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