Twilight is…

Random First Lines: I travel through the day of nightAnd see that dark has no reflection,While touching paradise of sin insideI... : Poetry » Read
this is just a freeverse poem i wrote for L.A. It's about Twilight. Not wonderful... View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 21, 2008 Reads: 32 Comments: 4 Likes: 1
Twilight is…
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ok, this is a good attempt.. but i've noticed that you mainly write about twilight and/or it's characters.. i understand how you must really adore the story/book but don't limit your potential to just that single theme.. you can definitely venture out to other themes/ideas, because not everyone has read the book, so it might be causing difficulty with regards to commenting on your works.. i hope my comment was helpful..
Posted: Jun 21, 2008
I agree wiht tin2twinling. likewise I am obsessed with Twilight but I don't let it rule over the things that I write. Try writing a story that doesn' involve vampires. It will take your mind of of things like that
just a bit of advise.
justine
Posted: Jun 23, 2008
ah you spoiled the secret of twilight
Posted: Jun 23, 2008
Loved it, creative idea to make a poem based on Twilight. But now I'm afraid I won't read it... ;)
Posted: Aug 30, 2008
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