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Twilight freeverse poem

Poem By: Catherine
Poetry


Tags: twilight

this is just a freeverse poem i wrote for L.A. It's about Twilight. Not wonderful... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 21, 2008    Reads: 32    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


DISCLAIMER: I do not retain rights to Twilight or its characters. I acknowledge thatTwilight and its characters belong to Stephenie Meyer. This is sort of a fanfiction.I'm not sure Ieven need this disclaimer, but just in case,I've put it. No copyright was intended.
Vampire, legends, and humans
What do you get when you combine these all?
The best book in the world:
Twilight.
She moved to Forks, a tiny town
Where she met a boy.
He was mysterious and beautiful.
He was hostile at first, and very cruel.
But the walls broke down and everything came out.
He admitted to the girl that he and his family were vampires
They fell in love.
But what does he do when she wants more?
When she wants to become one of his family.
He tells her, “no” but she persists.
What will he do next?
This is Twilight.
Twilight is love.
Twilight is fear.
Twilight is desire.

Twilight is…


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Comments:

ok, this is a good attempt.. but i've noticed that you mainly write about twilight and/or it's characters.. i understand how you must really adore the story/book but don't limit your potential to just that single theme.. you can definitely venture out to other themes/ideas, because not everyone has read the book, so it might be causing difficulty with regards to commenting on your works.. i hope my comment was helpful..

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.It was. Most of this material is old stuff that's been compiling. I just figured I'd put it on. Have you read my novel? It's still vampires, but it's not Twilight related at all.

I agree wiht tin2twinling. likewise I am obsessed with Twilight but I don't let it rule over the things that I write. Try writing a story that doesn' involve vampires. It will take your mind of of things like that
just a bit of advise.
justine

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for the advice.

ah you spoiled the secret of twilight

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Ah, you shouldn't have read this. :P Will you still read Twilight though? I hope so. :)

Loved it, creative idea to make a poem based on Twilight. But now I'm afraid I won't read it... ;)

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

ah! I need to take this one off, or put a spoiler warning on it...i'm glad you liked it, though:) I hope you still read Twilight!
=D



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