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Carry me away

Poem By: Chicka19
Poetry


Tags: far, evil, ship, fly

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Submitted: Oct 11, 2007    Reads: 60    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


 

I want to fly away.
Close my eyes and spread my wings.
Let the wind take me far away.
Far from here.
 
I want to board a ship.
Hear the waves against the side.
Feel the speed of it taking me far away.
Far from here.
 
Pack the car.
Take a trip with me.
See the scenery flashing by as we go far away.
Far from here.


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Lionheart
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i could leave it at that but then i wouldnt be able to tell you that what you long and love, i do too.
I have always wanted to fly, its such a beautiful symbol of freedom. I think that if everyone had wings, we would all have different ones. I think mine would be grey and a bit battered looking, representing my bleak look on life. I think yours would be pretty upright and bright, your spirit is very encouraging on this site, :D at least you always put a smile on my face. You are among a few on this site that add a feather to my broken wings.
I love sailing too, its such a beautiful way to see nature on a whole new plane. I usually just lean over the side for hours without saying a word, staring down at the electric patterns on the surface of the water :). I usually drift off, and forget im alive.
Car trips help me to forget things that bother me. That is why i loved your last line in particular. I let go of anxieties and lost causes. I drift from existence aswell, staring out the window lazily letting the world go by....usually trips here require watching hours of farmland hahahaah, but i still marvel at the newly born lamb and the scenery which is untouched by modern day technology. Also my parents think that i am depressed, in love or that i am on drugs, because when they talk to me in the car, i never seem to hear them, and then its another round of saying how slow i am and how i should see a doctor because my hearing is bad. (sigh) I can never expect them to understand the labirynth(cant spell...) of my mind.
If you ever are carried away, make sure you stop by and pick me up on the way too huh? :D
This world has me walking on gravity, but if i had wings i would certainly no longer be writing here, for which i am, in a way, thankful.
Thankyou for a moments escape from the world. I enjoyed reading this poem, it brought a tear to my eye. [yes lionheart's emotions are rare... but there...]

Posted: Oct 23, 2007

Author Comment:

I doubt your wings would be gray. Maybe a white gray if you will. I'm so glad I can bring a smile to your face and a feather to your wing. =D I love to feel the wind on my face, the spray of the water when I'm boating. The faster the better. Kind of like I want to get away as quickly as possibal. Well it seems that you have a more unique eye than your parents do for nature. Then next time I'm carried away I'll make a detour to pick you up. =) glad you liked it lionheart. =) mandy

Me to LOL :D Lindy

Posted: Jan 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hahaha yeah sometimes you just need to get away from it all and 'fly away'. =) mandy



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