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Shareing Sacred

Poem By: Chicka19
Poetry


this poem is one about feelings that are shared always. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 5, 2007    Reads: 98    Comments: 6    Likes: 1   


Shareing Sacred

The sound

Of the heart and the head.

The confusion

Of day and night.

The joys and angers

Of love and hatred.

The feelings we have.

The feelings we share

And treasure.

The feelings that are forever,

And will be forever,

In our heart.

And our minds.

Crouding our thoughts.

Letting us think of nothing

But what is within.

Our feelings confuse.

They anger and make us love.

But they are always,

And forever,

Shared.

 


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Comments:

Chicka19:

Another good one! Wonderful sentiments. Well written and expressed.

spelling - "Sharing" & "Crowding".

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Mar 5, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks for the comment. :)

I love it

Posted: Apr 5, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! :)

I like this alot! It kind of fits my life right now. The heart and mind constantly at war with each other resulting in angry love. Good job!

Posted: May 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank u! Well I hope that your heart and mind find a solution. :) thanks for the comment! :)

A fine poem.

Posted: May 21, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank u. :)

Nice work is all I have to say on this!

-Mike

Posted: Aug 26, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks mike! much appreciated! mandy

Awesome!

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! =)



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