All of Time V1

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Poem By: Codey
Poetry

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Submitted: Sep 2, 2008 Reads: 26 Comments: 4 Likes: 3

All of time—

A spectacle of brilliance.

Victory?

In silence waiting, wanting.

Limping on—

Hands of clapping mountains.

Falling down…

The bird of lost abandon.

Universe!

Come take and leave me nothing.

Waiting here—

I’ll weep with timeless fury.

A lifeline, a chorus of impatience,

When everything tumbles, I know I’ll keep on rising.

Enter life,

Timeless and so red,

There’s another want you wish you could fulfill,

Bringing waves,

Of soul and rising mind,

There’s a way

There’s a path

To it.

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Comments:

Classy Peach

Ok, this is a bit heavy. AND, I'm not normally lured away when it's gets heavy.

Off to v2.

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Ok.

RaisinGirl

I like it, it's good. now to 2...

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks

EdwardJBradleySr

Codey:

Liked them all. Gave each an "I Like It" vote. This one would benefit from having a skipped line between verses, if you intended any.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Sep 4, 2008