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Submitted: Sep 2, 2008 Reads: 28 Comments: 3 Likes: 3
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Codey!!!!!(echo)....come back to earth.
This one is a pleaser too. I think I like this one better than V2.
It's all very sad and sorrowful. Maybe a soldier of the universe?
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
this is better, in ways, but it presents such entirely different content-so this in itself is a completely different poem, in my opinion from the other 2...off to 4
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
Nice. This seems a little more personal. It's up there as well. Still a fallen angel melancholia to it.
Posted: Sep 8, 2008
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