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All of Time v3

Poem By: Codey
Poetry


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Submitted: Sep 2, 2008    Reads: 28    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


All of time—
A spectacle of brilliance.
Victory?
In silence waiting, wanting.
Limping on now—
                With hands of clapping mountains.
Falling down…
The bird of lost abandon.
 
Broken teeth—
                I bit the rocks of learning.
Weeping eyes,
                I kept on waiting yearning,
For something,
                So far away, so distant,
Where people are gods and
                Life is exists for something.
 
Still I see, through crowds of waiting trees,
                Another time, another place for me.
Angering, those who I thought I loved,
But I can’t,
                But I won’t
                                Not now.
 
It’s too late…
It’s too soon…
 
 


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Comments:

Codey!!!!!(echo)....come back to earth.

This one is a pleaser too. I think I like this one better than V2.

It's all very sad and sorrowful. Maybe a soldier of the universe?

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha! It is sad...all of them. I don't know why.

this is better, in ways, but it presents such entirely different content-so this in itself is a completely different poem, in my opinion from the other 2...off to 4

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

really? I thought I tried to invest in each one the same theme.

Nice. This seems a little more personal. It's up there as well. Still a fallen angel melancholia to it.

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Author Comment:

It is more personal...Thanks!



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