those elephants with the twig legs,

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Inspired by Salvador Dali
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Submitted: Sep 9, 2008 Reads: 28 Comments: 3 Likes: 3
those elephants with the twig legs,
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Great poem. And not because Dali is one of my favorites. Are you familiar with his 'paranoid critical transformation method'? Very interesting. The big Dali museum here in St Pete is awesome. A walk trough on shrooms is the way to go. I'm not condoning anything though.
This poem is right on key.
Posted: Sep 10, 2008
You are a great writer Codey.
I so enjoy all that you write.
This is slightly insane, which is perfect.
Posted: Sep 15, 2008
this is super-awesome...I luv Dali's trippy paintings, however, u Codey, have amazed me with this poem...what a fun trip I went on...I have to come back down to earth eventually, but I think I will dwell on this planet for a while *_*....so psychedelicccckkcc
-//eg
Posted: Sep 21, 2008
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