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Envisioned

Poem By: Codey
Poetry


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Submitted: Aug 23, 2008    Reads: 28    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


A darkness envisioned a light sanguine,
                                Rapturous healing and life, sublime…
 
Awake in myself yet alone in this sphere.
                                What beckons in silence?
— What beckons but fear.
 
Glow, glow candles of laughter,
Grow, grow in your frivolous waste,
Go, go to the places you realize,
Glean, glean all that you may.
 
Injustice served to the one of the sky—
                They refused to believe what passed them by.
 
Candles, they shrink, far off in the distance,
                And majestically waltz their slow summer dance.
 
                                Come back and think of what you’ve missed,
                                                Dream again for those off the list.
 
Come, come dawn…
Shed lights euphoric over me and my own.
 
 
 


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Comments:

Very good poem here Codey.
It's just right.
'They refused to believe what passed them by.'
This line is me for sure.

Posted: Aug 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad that it was so personal for you.

I'm just envisioning you standing on stage, all black, with a spotlight shining on you and using extra ordinary speech etiquette reading this.
Whatever you look like though!
Great poetry.

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Sweet! I would do it.

AWESOME...always u amaze me Codey...I luv this...I can't quite find the hidden meaning yet-cuz I am tired, but still, you are quite a talented poet, and I definitely see it as a work of art ;)
*Meg*

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha! Thanks.



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