
Random First Lines: Life has lost it angels,Demons have begun to crawl in.Scattering anger, breathing hate.Oh dear angels come... : Fantasy » Read
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Submitted: Jul 27, 2008 Reads: 35 Comments: 4 Likes: 3
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Posted: Jul 28, 2008
hi! codey. this is terrific. i especially liked ur reference to "fickle mistress". loved it. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 29, 2008
Codey! This shouts of your birth into the mortal world! Your subconscious re-living it's birth. The 3rd eye being your navel and the chord to your birth-mother.
Divine!
Posted: Aug 13, 2008
Hey, a relitive of mine created the art work of the picture you have posted for this poem! Excellent choice of picture, now anyways... let us divert away from my random tangent and get to the amazing poem you have created! It was an amazing poem! It flowed so beautifully and I must say you are very talented! I would love to read more of your work! =)
~Maple
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
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