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Rain for Me

Poem By: Codey
Poetry


Tags: rain, wash, eternal, hate

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Submitted: Jul 11, 2008    Reads: 78    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


There is a strange infinite melody,
A deeply running current
From the hearts of man into the
Distant clouds of black and white in blue,
To release their inner secrets
Onto the heads of man,
The clouds burst forth.
Into
A rain—
A gently drifting, silent pouring rain,
And through me penetrates,
This piercing pounding flow.
So cleanse—
And wash away my hate,
Wash me in a boundless, ceaseless mist,
Like steam, like newborn’s lit immersion.
But no—
Yet the rain, the healing rain,
The timeless run of everlasting blue,
Can no more wipe clean my heart from hate,
As I can justify it.


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Comments:

I think you should read the book "The Alchemist" by Paulo Coelho. It's my fav book. It teaches us how to slip into the subliminal stage of existence and how to accept what the universe wants to offer us. And, accept it humbly.

You are on such a pilgrimage! Whew! Your bloods steeps with the mysticism of the journey to the soul of the universe. Wonderful!

I like how you started off with blue and ended with blue. You should search out why you are referencing that colour so often. Deep emotions long colours that represent a deficit.

Beautiful poet!

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I will look at that book. It sounds amazing. Blue, in this poem specifically, represents, to me and in some cases, healing, from whatever. In this case hate.
Thanks for reading all of this!

You amaze me Codey...once again...your writing style stands out like a burning flame in the sky on a dark, dreary night full of fog and weeping clouds...;D
*Meg*

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Oooh! Thank you. That was a poem in itself.



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