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Submitted: Jul 11, 2008 Reads: 78 Comments: 2 Likes: 2
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I think you should read the book "The Alchemist" by Paulo Coelho. It's my fav book. It teaches us how to slip into the subliminal stage of existence and how to accept what the universe wants to offer us. And, accept it humbly.
You are on such a pilgrimage! Whew! Your bloods steeps with the mysticism of the journey to the soul of the universe. Wonderful!
I like how you started off with blue and ended with blue. You should search out why you are referencing that colour so often. Deep emotions long colours that represent a deficit.
Beautiful poet!
Posted: Aug 13, 2008
You amaze me Codey...once again...your writing style stands out like a burning flame in the sky on a dark, dreary night full of fog and weeping clouds...;D
*Meg*
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
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