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Sterilized

Poem By: Codey
Poetry


Tags: sterilized

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Pretty obvious honestly. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 12, 2008    Reads: 21    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Sterilized and breaking through
The plastic bubble wrap so binding me.
Ready for the world, it seems you find me
Lacking.
As always.
 
And now can you find a way
To close and latch that
Acerbic, draconic gate that lets so much
Acid into my already burning eyes?
 
Look into your crystal ball, and predict me.
Can you dance your way through the corridors of years
And break against the door at the end?
What waits inside is what I am and
What you hate.
 
And now dust the chalk on your hands and
Take hold of that high bar.
Twist and warp your mind like you do.
Project meaningless panes of smoky glass around me.
I’ll break them for you.
 
 
 
 
 


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Comments:

Actually because you think on multi-levels, this poetry is NOT pretty obvious to a general population. Very few cosmic people in the world.

Wow. You are indeniably passionate. You search for partners unconcsiously who have heat in their bones. You adore conflict in relationships, that push the boundaries of normalcy. Funny, not too many want that. THey prefer normalcy.

Nope, not you. You want someone who has an equal thought process and is willing to make you think higher.

Neat.

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes, I do. Again you have exposed the truth in these lines. Thanks!

this is awesome!:D...I luv the ending

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

That's my favorite part too.



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