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Heart is Breaking

Poem By: ConcreteAngel
Poetry


a poem i wrote to my ex...kinda a break up poem i guess..but i had to get my feelings across to him..note: it was a long distance relationship and i was in it for about 5 months View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 15, 2008    Reads: 75    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   


MY HEART IS BREAKING AND I DON'T KNOW WHY

WHEN I THINK OF U I JUST WANT TO CRY

WHAT WE USED TO HAVE

SEEMS SO FAR AWAY

NOW I TALK TO U AND LOL IS ALL U SAY

BEFORE I AGREED TO BE UR ONE AND ONLY

U SAID DAMN I'VE FALLEN HEAD OVER HEELS

BUT THE GIRL DOESNT FEEL THE SAME WAY

U TOLD ME U LOVED ME EVERY NIGHT

EVEN WHEN I WASNT SURE THAT I LOVED U YET

THEN U ASKED ME OUT AND I AGREED AND SAID YES

AND THEN IT WAS I WHO HAD ALL THE CRAZY FEELINGS INSIDE

EVERY THOUGHT DURING MY DAY HAD U IN IT

I THOUGHT ABOUT U EVERY MINUTE

U SAID U COULDNT GET ME OFF UR MIND

NOW I THINK THAT MAYBE I WAS BLIND

I STAYED ON THE COMPUTER WITH U ALL NIGHT

I SO WANTED U TO BE WITHIN REACH WITHIN SIGHT

WHY DO U KEEP SO MUCH BOTTLED UP INSIDE

I'M UR GF THATS WHAT I AM HERE FOR BABY

DON'T U THINK THAT JUST MAYBE

U COULD OPEN UP TO ME

TELL ME WHAT U ARE FEELING SO THAT I CAN SEE

I AM HERE TO LISTEN TO UR TROUBLES

OR YOUR JOYS

I WAS THERE FOR U! WHERE U TRULY THERE FOR ME?

 

BABY DO U REMEMBER THAT NIGHT

WHEN I SEEN ALL THAT STUFF THAT BINX HAD WROTE

I SO WANTED TO WRITE HER A HEATED NOTE

THAT NIGHT I FELT LIKE I HAD BEEN AN IDIOT TO TRUST U

BUT U CONVINCED ME THAT NONE OF THAT STUFF WAS TRUE

AND WHAT EXACTLY WAS IT THAT DAVID WAS TRYIN TO TELL ME

WHAT EXACTLY WAS HE TRYIN TO GET ME TO SEE

U SAID IT WAS NOTHIN TO JUST IGNORE HIM

AND I THOUGHT THAT HE WAS JUST BUTTIN INTO OUR LIFES

BUT WORDS U NEVER FORGET THEY LEAVE MARKS LIKE KNIFES

SO HE STILL HAD ME THINKIN ABOUT WHAT HE HAD SAID

PLEASE TELL ME NOW WAS THERE ANY TRUTH THERE

WHEN I TOLD U ABOUT MY TROUBLES

WITH MY DAD AND MOM

THE ONLY THING THAT U COULD OFFER

WAS I WISH THAT I WAS THERE WITH U

BUT U COULD HAVE OFFERED MORE U SEE

U REALLY COULD HAVE BEEN THERE FOR ME

ALL U HAD TO DO WAS LISTEN

JUST LEND A WILLING EAR

U DON'T ALWAYS HAVE TO BE NEAR

TO HELP WIPE AWAY SADNESS AND FEAR

I MEAN SURE U SAID THAT U LOVED ME

BUT WHAT DOES THAT REALLY MEAN

U CAN LOVE SO MANY THINGS IN SO MANY DIFFERENT WAYS

U CAN LOVE FAMILY AND FRIENDS

FASHIONS AND TRENDS

FOOD AND SLEEP

BUT PLEASE THINK WHEN U SPEAK

IN WHAT WAY THAT U REALLY LOVE

DO U LOVE ME ENOUGH TO TELL IT TO THE WORLD

OR IS IT JUST A SECRET BETWEEN U AND ME

U TOLD ME NOT TO HURT OVER YOU

BUT I DO

I MEAN WHO KNEW

THAT FEELINGS SO DEEP

COULD DEVELOP OVER THE INTERNET AS WE SPEAK

U WANTED TO FLY ME TO OHIO

BUT NOW LET ME STOP AND THINK

DID U EVER TRULY CONSIDER COMING TO TEXAS

I MEAN SURE ONCE U SAID IT

U KNOW I TRULY THOUGHT ABOUT COMIN TO OHIO

WHAT WOULD I HAVE FOUND I DO NOT KNOW

WOULD U HAVE BEEN WAITIN THERE WITH OPEN ARMS

I HAVE THIS FEELING DEEP INSIDE

THAT MAYBE SOME OF UR FEELINGS FOR ME

HAVE DIED!!

I FEEL LIKE MAYBE

WE ARE JUST FRIENDS

AND I REALLY HOPE THAT IF IT ENDS THAT IS HOW IT ENDS

LET ME JUST TELL YOU THAT I DO LOVE YOU

AND THERE WILL ALWAYS BE A PLACE FOR YOU

IN MY HEART


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Comments:

OMG we both LOVE that poem!!!!
It reminds us both of our relationships.. =[
By the way, these are two best friends on one profile.
We both write poems. We've written a lot of new ones but haven't posted them on here yet... So check our writings out later if u want.

We love your poem!! =[

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

awww well thanks so much! yeah ugh i finally ended that relationship after five months..but that was my kind of break up poem to him along with a letter! and i'll make sure to check out your poems and tell you what i think..thanks once again

this story really touched a nerve , as the song says ''breaking up is hard to do'' sometimes it becomes inevitable and you just have to let go . you never stop loving but the time has come . for me it was either live my dreams or continue to live hers , i chose to stop visiting the pub , gossiping about the neighbours and playing voyeur , choosing instead to dedicate my spare time to visiting places like paris , rome , athens and so many more wonderful places full of romance , now my life is wonderful . i hope hers is too .

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah it is very hard to do..I felt like a bad person after..but I thought about all the reasons I had done it and I didnt feel so bad then..I'm glad to hear your life is wonderful..hope it stays that way :)

wow...this was lovely!!...The first part sounded like as if you had written the whol story of my life with my prince charming(who isnt now there though.
It used to be the same way. When i was finally sure that i loved him, and wanted to be with him, he realised that he wanted to go with his ex-gf!!...*suck*
But, before, every night and day, when used to chat online, he would tell me that he loved me and wanted to be with me...anyways....people say that what ever happens, happens for good. So i guess what has happened was for good...eheh

Anyways, i got a bit emotional here...sorry about tht....lol

Great poem again!

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank ya! Yeah it does suck when you feel their love just withers away! But yeah I guess everything does happen for a reason and it turns out for the best in the end..sometimes its hard to see that but i'm beginning to! haha no need to be sorry about getting emotional =) thanks again =)

Sounds like you haven't given up on him completely. Every relationship you have, when it is over there is still parts of it that stay with you forever. And they always will.

Posted: Nov 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah I was with him for about five months, I never gave up completely and in some ways I still care about him. But thats been over for awhile now. I got a new person that makes me actually feel like a gf =D



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