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Poem By: controverse
Poetry


I wrote this for someone I..uh...you know, it's complicated. Just keep in mind I wrote this for someone. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 11, 2008    Reads: 29    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Snowflakes, shimmering in the light

Red roses, blooming to an extravagance
The most beautiful of things earthly
Shan't linger past a fleeting second

Whence has a silver lining
Fastened itself to a cloud astray
Or a fiery sky, rumbling crimson
Not burn itself to smouldering darkness

A beauty's hair, flowing, will not
Stay golden past a century's turn
Her endearing eyes, beaming brilliance
True as sapphire until the shed of tear

When the sight of her, however majestic
Line with deep wounds of time
And the graceful walk of hers
Become laboured with an era's burden

However mortal the body of hers
However quickly time has passed
She shan't forget a love well cherished
The eternity
Held true, held golden, forever and ever


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Comments:

Nice, very good wording, me likey this bit "Whence has a silver lining
Fastened itself to a cloud astray
Or a fiery sky, rumbling crimson
Not burn itself to smouldering darkness" i find it easy to envoke an image from this one that is so symbolic, well done!!! xXx

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

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Thanks!



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