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So My Heart Bleeds a Passionate Lament

Poem By: controverse
Poetry


Tags: sadness, hurt, sad, heart

A wounded heart cries a passionate lament..

I realized that this is the "Summary" section, not the "Tell Us What You Think of This Poem" section, but anyways, I think it's a little repetive, but I still love the imagery I wrote in this however long ago.

This is one of the only dark poems I have. As you can see I'm pretty positive most of the time ^-^ View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 11, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


The dullest scalpel of rusted metals

Bears itself into tissues of my soul

Slices through the hole that is my love

So my heart bleeds a passionate lament

What feelings are there in the chilling statuette

Who can deter its nearing arm

When it strikes my wounded emotions

Whence a woeful song flows from my heart

That, whose canine teeth bear my blood

Weaving into the soliloquay of a weeping heart

That, whose feline claws cut my soul

Dripping a ballad of an injured heart

Who can heal this bleeding heart

Where sad sonnets flow from open scars

When shall those grieving words end

Whose rhythms beat with each contraction of heart?


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Comments:

great poem!!!
i really like these lines
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Who can heal this bleeding heart

Where sad sonnets flow from open scars

When shall those grieving words end

Whose rhythms beat with each contraction of heart?


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great job!!!

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks! I appreciate your feeback

I think this is a beautiful piece, Controverse...it's a slightly dark poem, but that doesn't make it bad at all...it is true and full of human emotion...so it is a work of art to me...I really do like this...I am marking it for my upcoming top ten list of best poems on booksie ;D

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh yay :D thanks you very much for the compliment! It is dark but I can't write happy poetry all the time, eh? ;-)



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