The dullest scalpel of rusted metals
So my heart bleeds a passionate lament
Whence a woeful song flows from my heart
Dripping a ballad of an injured heart

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A wounded heart cries a passionate lament..
I realized that this is the "Summary" section, not the "Tell Us What You Think of This Poem" section, but anyways, I think it's a little repetive, but I still love the imagery I wrote in this however long ago.
This is one of the only dark poems I have. As you can see I'm pretty positive most of the time ^-^
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Submitted: Jun 11, 2008 Reads: 35 Comments: 2 Likes: 2
The dullest scalpel of rusted metals
So my heart bleeds a passionate lament
Whence a woeful song flows from my heart
Dripping a ballad of an injured heart
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great poem!!!
i really like these lines
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Who can heal this bleeding heart
Where sad sonnets flow from open scars
When shall those grieving words end
Whose rhythms beat with each contraction of heart?
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great job!!!
Posted: Jun 12, 2008
I think this is a beautiful piece, Controverse...it's a slightly dark poem, but that doesn't make it bad at all...it is true and full of human emotion...so it is a work of art to me...I really do like this...I am marking it for my upcoming top ten list of best poems on booksie ;D
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
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