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Stars of the Night

Poem By: controverse
Poetry


A short poem about longing.

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Submitted: Jun 15, 2008    Reads: 48    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


Does she see the stars at night
They are the tears of mine
Each shining droplet unblinking
Another heartfelt tale of me
Can she read those flying colours
Each spelling her name
Will she spend a passing moment
And decipher each note left for her
And listen quietly, listen silently
To the music that flows
From my soul to her ears
That is a sad song from me
And will she let that sonnet
Flow into her heart as it did mine
To let that lead her into the stars
So they may guide her home to me


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Comments:

It's so sad, but so pretty. It gave me a picture story in my head. =) Very beautiful. =) Mandy

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks :)

This is so sad..but beautiful. I love it. Great job. I felt like I was right there, and could almost see the stars. :)

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the compliment! I could definitely see the stars when I wrote it lol

I saw the stars....they glittered like little silver droplets shimmering in the pale light. I loved it. YOur great.

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much :)



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