My Confussion and My Frustration

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Poem By: courtlol
Poetry

Tags: love, frustration, confussion, hate, friends

I get frustrated over liking this guy and im sick of liking him. View table of contents...

Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 Reads: 74 Comments: 6 Likes: 4

You walk in to a crowded room,

but somehow we are still alone.

You’ve broke my heart a thousand times,

but somehow it’s still yours.

cause,

I don’t want to love you,

but I don’t want to hate you now.

I don’t want to see you,

but I need you, here with me.

My friends say it will pass,

but I say it will last.

I’ve tried to move on,

but I can’t stand it when your gone.

cause,

I don’t want to love you,

but I don’t want to hate you now.

I don’t want to see you,

but I need you, here with me.

So I’ll hold on.

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Comments:

Buttercup

I like the way you expressed your emotions in this poem. I've been there, haha! It gets better.

Posted: Jul 24, 2008

Author Comment:

i know eventually. thanx ,/../

storyofmylife

ohh my gosh i am going through the same thing, its really complicated, and it sucks.

but i loved the poem, very true, i can tell u wrote with emotion

=]

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

yes lots of it thanks ,/../

JohnstonCunning

Wow Courtney. Who is this for?? I love it.

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks i actually wrote this so it would be a song i was randomly singing like whatever came to my mind and i came up with the chorus and i just went with it. i love music so it came from my heart. i had like this crush like forever and it kinda can apply to any crush i ever have so its universal. and fun. thanks for the comment ,/../