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Tears Wont Fall

Poem By: courtlol
Poetry


Tags: tears, love, here, friends

Just to let my friends know im here for them. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 2, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


I’m lost for words.
I can’t hold back.
I can’t concentrate.
This is what I lack.
My mind swirling,
My stomach turning,
What can I say,
To make you stay?
I see your face,
Every-single-day.
I ask what’s wrong?
You just say I’m ok.
I’m hear to listen.
I’m always here,
To help you,
Wipe away,
Every tear.
 


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Comments:

this is really good and i can relate, sometimes i dont think my friends realize that i really am there for them and i wont judge them for what theyve done even if i dont agree with it, sometimes they are scared to tell me but i love them all so much i could never hate them for theyre mistakes/

anyway good job

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you ,/../

awsome poem i loved it..

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you ,/../

i like this one courtney :)

Posted: Sep 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you andy!! :) love comments XD ,/../

great poem courtney
i'm sure that they'll come around to telling you...they always do :)

Posted: Sep 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for the comment gigi and i hope they will too



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