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Seeing what my eyes see....

Poem By: Courtnee25
Poetry


This is basically about my emotions. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 25, 2008    Reads: 63    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


I gaze into a distant meadow and sure enough, there was a mocking bird,

It flew high in the air, swooped into a branch, and fell down onto the ground,

The last inches of its life seeping out of its fragile body,

I love nature, I love to write, I love the soft warm hug of your parent when you’re in fright,

I love the way my boy friend kisses my neck, and my whole body shivers with excitement,

I don’t intend on letting him in my pants just yet though, not until I’m old enough,

You see a child crying in pain, I see a lesson gained.

You see a heavy downpour of rain, I see a thousand of my tears I’m crying.

You see me saying, “I’m sorry.” I say you should have been the one apologizing!


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Comments:

Very nicely done. I loved the last line it was my favorite!

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks.

Wow Im speechless.I like the last line.

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks,

Wow, that was good. I like how you used how you see things, that's just amazing. I understand this poem alot more than some of my own... lol, that's kind of funny.

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks alot! Its good to know I have fans of my writing! :D

Excellent twist at the end. Makes that message so powerful as it sneaks up on the reader, I like poetry like that. I wish i could write more of it.

craaig

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks



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