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Death of an Year

Poem By: craziantix
Poetry


The thought of how an year dies and is reborn, set to verse View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 24, 2008    Reads: 46    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


DEATH OF AN YEAR

The revolution is over,
Life has come full circle,
And so has the Earth.
The winter cold snows freely,
Burial rites for a geriatric year,
Well into its twelfth and last month.
The clouds gather in condolence.
The sky darkens to express sorrow,
A blanket of white to set the mood.
Nature mourns as Nature is reborn.
Elsewhere, celebrations,
The annual passing away made an occasion.
Effigies of the dead one burnt,
Individual pyres, contributing to the whole.
In memoriam, good times once forgotten , now revived.
Music, explosions, fresh stars in the sky.
Then a moment, neither here nor there.
An epoch transition compressed into a millisecond.
The euphoria of unbelonging,
When the past is dead,
And the travails of the new have not yet begun.
Then death throes give way to birth pangs.
Time speeds up again.
And through death, new life is born.


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I wish there were more poets like you craziantix on booksie. We need more poems like this!

I really enjoyed how you described that yearly change. You also used a ton of words that most people just skim over and made them into your own beautiful work of art. I loved it and can't wait till you make another masterpiece!

Regan

(Plus, you used the word "epoch" so that in itself makes this poem awesome ;) )

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

Hey thanks a load ReganFinch, I'm sure I'm not the only one, although I try my best. I'll be putting something up soon though.

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Cool. I agree with ReganFinch. The fact that you used the word, "epoch" made it awesome. Seriously though, it was already awesome.

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks , although I don't see what all the fuss about 'epoch' is ..See I used it again
Like I said , one tries his best :)

Well this is incredible.

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks , although I can only guess why you're so terse at saying that. :)

hi! c. the mourning is total and it has developed as an elegy on the death of a year. the past paves the way for the present. and that's the way of time, my friend. excellent poem. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, it was what i was aiming for, You seem to have grasped the essence of whtat I was trying to say !!
I hope you will check out some of my other writing as well



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