DEATH OF AN YEAR

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The thought of how an year dies and is reborn, set to verse View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 24, 2008 Reads: 46 Comments: 5 Likes: 2
DEATH OF AN YEAR
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I wish there were more poets like you craziantix on booksie. We need more poems like this!
I really enjoyed how you described that yearly change. You also used a ton of words that most people just skim over and made them into your own beautiful work of art. I loved it and can't wait till you make another masterpiece!
Regan
(Plus, you used the word "epoch" so that in itself makes this poem awesome ;) )
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
Hey thanks a load ReganFinch, I'm sure I'm not the only one, although I try my best. I'll be putting something up soon though.
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
Cool. I agree with ReganFinch. The fact that you used the word, "epoch" made it awesome. Seriously though, it was already awesome.
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
Well this is incredible.
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
hi! c. the mourning is total and it has developed as an elegy on the death of a year. the past paves the way for the present. and that's the way of time, my friend. excellent poem. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 4, 2008
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