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Promises of Stars

Poetry By: crystal aqua
Poetry


lol, out of all my poems, i love this one the best. Kopikuu gave me the beginning, kopikuu is so awesome!! XD together, we wrote this poem. Kopikuu came up with the beginning, I continued. enjoy~
p.s. even when kopikuu denies it, she's an excellent writer, ne?


Submitted:Apr 7, 2009    Reads: 114    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


The twinkling stars in the darkness of the sky
Whisper streams of promises
To my listening ears
Promises that I know
Will never be fulfilled

The snow flower falls in heavy drifts around me
Surrounding me with glacial beauty
Never to be touched

Sometimes
I just want to listen to those promises
Believe that they could come true
I want to touch that glacial beauty
Release the beauty from the bitter ice

Sometimes
I just want to believe in the impossible
Believe what the stars whisper upon my ears
Try to touch the untouchables

And yet
I stand immobile listening to those promises
Lie paralyzed in the bitter beauty
As warm tears fall down my face
Only to freeze in the ruthless cold

As those promises will never reach my heart
Empty words they will remain
Snow flowers that cover me with an icy blanket
Beckoning me to an everlasting dream
Of eternal beauty
And promises yet to come.





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