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Another World for Me to See!!

Poetry By: crzyanglcassie14

This is just kind of a thing that popped into my head. My friends really liked it and thought it was neat so I hope you do too! Its a new thing for me. I really look forward to criticism and complements. Please comment! Thank you for reading!! :)

Submitted:Nov 24, 2008    Reads: 242    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   

Under water.

It's like another world.

So free.

Every move you make,

Vibrates through the water.

Making little subtle waves.


Is so silent.

All the words said are dreamlike.

So far away,

But they are just above,

The water line.


Is so beautiful.

A whole new world,

For just me to see.


To be a mermaid would be an honor.

To live in the ocean would be amazing.

To live underwater,

Would be my miracle.


No need to hold your breath.

Just swim.

Be free and move so softly.


Is just another world,

For me to see.


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