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Crzyanglcassie14's first rhyming poem!!!!!! :)

Poetry By: crzyanglcassie14
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Ok, so I am really really REALLY excited. The first like few lines popped in my head rhyming, and I had no trouble rhyming throughout the poem. My friends said it was really good so I hope you think so too. Please give honest opinions. It is my first rhyming poem, so I know you probably have critism! Well, thanks! :) How you like it!


Submitted:May 29, 2009    Reads: 85    Comments: 7    Likes: 1   


I wish I knew

What to do

When I feel so in need

To feel myself breathe

I wish I knew

What to say

When the words won't come

To my tongue today

I wish I could say

That you don't drink your life away

But I know

That those words would never be true

I so wish I could say

That you were acting like real parents

Not making me so blue.

I wish it were true

That my live was full of love

And you weren't being you

My wishes haven't come true

I still wish on the stars in the sky

To bring a sparkle to my eyes

And let me see the good in you





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